Oh man oh man this entry is so awesome!! The whole concept of it is amazing - I love the interactive nature of it. The title is perfect, too, and it works so well with the quote - it was super clear what you were going for.
The art is so beautiful! I love the blue highlights in Takumi's hair and the gentle shading. His fingers are so long and elegant *o* And Souma's stance contrasts nicely with Takumi's - they both look so strong and confident intheir own way. I really like the shape of Takumi's legs and his knees *o* The shading is so niceee especially with the warmer tint of the shadows ahh and even the cupboards have personality <3 Takumi's kitchen sjdhnfalgjk EVERYTHING GLISTENS and it's gorgeous.
I really like how each ingredient links into the short segment, and the common format throughout. It's really nice and it makes the piece look so coherent. The writing is lovely in how it seems to get to the heart of what's there - it showcases the mutual respect and the competitive flair in their relationship.
And I love how although the themes are the same across the two characters, the way they're laid out and presented is different enough that it feels fresh each time? You know you're approaching the same topic from two different perspectives, but like the title implies they don't just mirror one another - they work with and around each other to form a complete picture. Their individual personalities come out really well!!
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The art is so beautiful! I love the blue highlights in Takumi's hair and the gentle shading. His fingers are so long and elegant *o* And Souma's stance contrasts nicely with Takumi's - they both look so strong and confident intheir own way. I really like the shape of Takumi's legs and his knees *o* The shading is so niceee especially with the warmer tint of the shadows ahh and even the cupboards have personality <3 Takumi's kitchen sjdhnfalgjk EVERYTHING GLISTENS and it's gorgeous.
I really like how each ingredient links into the short segment, and the common format throughout. It's really nice and it makes the piece look so coherent. The writing is lovely in how it seems to get to the heart of what's there - it showcases the mutual respect and the competitive flair in their relationship.
And I love how although the themes are the same across the two characters, the way they're laid out and presented is different enough that it feels fresh each time? You know you're approaching the same topic from two different perspectives, but like the title implies they don't just mirror one another - they work with and around each other to form a complete picture. Their individual personalities come out really well!!