catlarks: (SASO: lean)
Lira ([personal profile] catlarks) wrote in [community profile] saso2016_r1 2016-07-04 01:51 am (UTC)

This is such, such an ambitious AU to fit into the space of a SASO main round entry in ANY work format, so kudos to you guys for shooting for the stars. Other people have said a lot of the things I'm thinking — the video editing is lovely and the contrast between the washed-out colors of Sousuke's world versus the far more vibrant color scheme for Makoto's is so good. There's so much going on and ngl I feel like it's almost too much for my brain to take in and process, but the presentation does make me want to take it and chew on it.

The thing I like best is definitely how you handled tone with the pacing, transitions, and musical choice for the video, the mood of your entry is so palpable and it hit home for me especially hard with the wall of photographs and the light playing across it, just the combination of the imagery with the music worked really, really well. I super admire this sort of multimedia storytelling because it's weaving so many pieces, so many kinds of input, together and when it works well it's incredibly impressive to see.

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