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arranjar ([personal profile] arranjar) wrote in [community profile] saso2016_r1 2016-07-12 08:03 pm (UTC)

Onoda in this comic is Too Relatable honestly. In all seriousness though this entry was so good what the heck! You captured the sense of duality perfectly in the art-- I really liked the symmetry and red/blue theme in some of the pages, and the duality of having some of the more potent scenes told without dialogue (that was really effective!). There were really sweet, sort of understated moments (like morning practice and the last two pages) but also some really funny ones (all the ones featuring the other cast members-- I kinda died at "I MUST GO"). You can tell a lot of care was put into this entry and it's got a lot of heart so kudos to everyone involved!

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